I wrote this poem a few weeks ago, but it didn’t seem right at the time, so I never posted it. I came back to it tonight and found that all it needed was a new title, a couple of word changes, and one line added in. It feels like a whole new poem now. So weird how that happens.
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Excellent post ! Your fertile imagination knows no bound. I wonder why you hesitated to click on ‘publish’ once you wrote it the first time without the new title, last line and change of words. Keep writing.
Thanks Anita! I don’t know why I hesitated. Sometimes I just need to sit on the words before they seem right.
Beautiful. I’m there with you.